Sunday, October 12, 2008

Treatment For A Broken Humourous Bone

's Gate Makai

My first fanfiction on Yoroiden Samurai Troopers which I completed and this area is also on EFP (though not for long).
wrote a couple of years ago and revised several times, but here I will do the umpteenth and endless corrections.
Maya is a character I had already created the television series (one day tell you everything, I promise ... for now I'm too lazy XD), then already beginning of the story I wrote has a very firm with the group who knows perfectly well
begins immediately after the second television series, and just before the first OVA. Specifically with regard to consistency with the anime, I tried to be as accurate as possible, and, in future stories that I write, set during the first and second OVA (but not the third, too hate the new armor from Michelin Man) , plays a more marginal role in the sense that its action at the end does not change the plot.
As usual, I hope it's not too Sue.



author: Edvigelacivetta
beta Arwenthewitch and [info] harleen313 aka ChristineBlack FN
rating: PG
genre: action
warnings: AU, spoilers.
characters: Hachibi Touma, new character, a bit 'all the others.
plot A key opens the doors of the Makai. A girl looking for that lost part of himself and five friends will help you aim.
thanks: Christine Black that even today I endured while disregarding the fandom. ^ ^


1. Prologue

A nightmare.
A bad dream from which he could not wake up.
had to be so.
Maya tried in every way to convince herself that what was happening was not real, but only a trick of his imagination, while crouched in a corner of that dark, damp prison, weeping in silence unable to stop.
Nearby, Suiko, Korin and Kongo, the three plates captured by Arago, lying motionless in a sleep from which she was unable to awake. Had tried long, but nothing had been for his efforts. Most probably their common destiny was to remain confined in that gloomy darkness for eternity.
"Mom ... Dad ..." she sobbed, as he continued to curse to be wanted to go back at all costs in Japan.
If she had stayed at home, surely would still be living his quiet and monotonous life, which he regretted for the first time.
still felt upon himself the acrid smell of burning sulfur in the embers of the throne room, he could out of his mind the tedious litany that evil spirits had been saying, as she lay, naked and helpless in the middle of a pentacle, but, worse still, he could not leave the impression he had lost forever an important part of his soul. He felt incomplete, and that terrified her more than imprisonment.
What was happening? Why he felt so afraid? What had happened to all the courage that until then had managed to make it go forward in that struggle? It was like vanished without a trace.
suddenly felt the warmth of a hand on her shoulder and a friendly voice that tried to reassure her.
"Maya, do not cry anymore. I have come to take you away. "
Touma had finally arrived.
Without hesitation, the girl clung to him still crying, while the samurai, initially surprised, pressed it gently to himself, trying to calm her down, not at all worried by the strange behavior.
Shin, Seiji and Xiu, finally free, watched the scene without saying a word, preparing the final and decisive battle.

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